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Discussion in 'Fan-Fiction' started by DragonFire92x, Sep 7, 2016.
Part of chapter 6 is now up! If you haven't guessed yet on what's going to happen next, try to!
69 tails lmfao. I'm guessing leb shoots meng and wounds her. When she is dying leb remembers his love for her. They penetrate and meng dies. The end. :3
Leb shoots you? Can't wait to read :3 Inb4 you edit :3
dik wat u talking about :3
The finale is finally here! Enjoy!
Here are some fun facts to be read after the final chapter (contains spoilers)
Here are some fun facts about this fanfic that you probably didn’t realize.
Around the time I was writing chapter three, I already figured how I wanted to end this fanfic. For those who have read my other fanfic, Tower of Haradon, you would know that I like to leave subtle hints. Unfortunately, Meng didn’t appear much in chapter three so I slipped in the big hint in chapter four. When they were having a passionate kissing session, Lebmont tries to reach down her body but is stopped by her. I played it off as her being shy but it was really for the “big” ending.
Double meanings and word play
Starting with the fanfic title itself, Dark Love refers to the forbidden love between a human and demon. It also refers to the Lebmont, being a black man, falling in love.
The naming in chapter four may seem odd at first. A little bit of Asian racism was used with the name Li but what I was getting at was that Asians tend to pronounce their L’s and R’s similarly. After punching Anioah, he says “... Li... Anna”. So the focus was to get Lebmont to say Rihanna. I even named the chapter to be similar to one of the lyrics of her song. The choice of Mr. Brown was to reference Chris Brown and the time he had punched Rihanna. Then I just added a little fisting to top it off.
There was a brief mention of where Anioah used to work "See You and Tea" and how she hated it as the customers there, were pu*****. It really shouldn't be a surprise because the name of the place practically describes them when said out loud.
There was a conversation between Lebmont and Goldfur where Goldfur says “If I was a bounty hunter, I would certainly want her head.” The obvious interpretation is bounty hunters refer to their prey as heads to take out. In hindsight of the final chapter, it could also be interpreted as Goldfur wanting Meng’s d*** considering he was portrayed as a gay character.
The movie reference
The movie referred to in chapter three was Snakes on a Plane starring Samuel Jackson. Yes, another black man reference... in case you haven’t realized the racism in this fanfic. The main line from the movie was when Samuel L Jackson says “I have had it with this mothaf****** snakes on this mothaf****** plane.” I then changed it up with a little wordplay with the context of Lebmont fighting Sia in the fields.
The song Goldfur was singing was Ariana Grande’s “Side to Side” with some dirty lyrics. The lyrics were actually meant to foreshadow the last chapter. If sang from the perspective of Meng, it becomes clear that it was about her and what she was going to do.
Haha I actually realized this before the spoilers, after the 6th chapter, so funny!
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I decide to come back on this forum for once and the first thing I see is you telling me to check out some porn. Bye.
Dw there aren't any pictures. It's just dragon's gold.
What.... the actual fuck did I just read.
@Sadowmancer @Evanescent @mmg556 smh nubs there aren't any pictures dw.
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